Some new poetry

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The Invisible Man

An invisible man sits forgotten
A dull look pasted to his face
As visible people tell him
That they love him
Want to bear him up
Above the crowds
Proclaim him as God—
Savior for those who cry
Acid reflex out sieve hearts
Dripping all over their melting existence
But how can they promise
When they cannot see him?

He wants to build a masterpiece
He wants the angels to sing praises
To his Dynasty – a man turned demigod
He wants his mentality to match
His over grown body
Which towers over the mortals
Not straining in its own weakness
As he carries a body too big
For one invisible man to carry.

ⓒ Liam Elliott 2007. All Rights Reserved.
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I was going to post more but I am just barely happy enough with this one.

Ill keep you you people who dont read this shit informed somehow haha.

~Peace.